Nice job, I really enjoyed the visuals along with just the sound of the bee. I think you already realize you accidentally rendered the duration of the video too long, but that is easily fixable. My main suggestion would be to make the text at the end stay on screen for a bit longer. I had no time to read it and had to go back and pause it, but over all very nice! :)
The concept really came through with the movement of the bee through the space. It took me a while to process that those leaves in the hex shape, were dying. I would explore messing with the scale of the healthier ones, so you see these large leaves shrinking and turning brown. That may help that message come across. I think I was just too intrigued by the bee and overlooked that other part of the concept. I also agree with the previous concept of having the text lasting longer on screen. Besides that, it looks great.
Really cool concept and way to create motion with the animation of the bee and horizontal composition. I would maybe increase the size of the leaves and make the transition from healthy to dead even more extreme, just to push the concept further.
I think after watching the video a couple of times the casual viewer would understand your message, but adding some text here and there might help you get it across even better.
Awesome job! I think that maybe the dying of the plant could have happened faster with more informative text towards the end. Maybe if the plant image were larger, this would be easier for the viewer to see and understand. I love the horizontal movement, though. This composition truly makes it feel like the bee is flying through space.
Nice job, I really enjoyed the visuals along with just the sound of the bee. I think you already realize you accidentally rendered the duration of the video too long, but that is easily fixable. My main suggestion would be to make the text at the end stay on screen for a bit longer. I had no time to read it and had to go back and pause it, but over all very nice! :)
ReplyDeletenice work, I would consider using a flower dying instead of leaves for more of a visual impact.
ReplyDeleteThe concept really came through with the movement of the bee through the space. It took me a while to process that those leaves in the hex shape, were dying. I would explore messing with the scale of the healthier ones, so you see these large leaves shrinking and turning brown. That may help that message come across. I think I was just too intrigued by the bee and overlooked that other part of the concept. I also agree with the previous concept of having the text lasting longer on screen. Besides that, it looks great.
ReplyDeleteReally cool concept and way to create motion with the animation of the bee and horizontal composition. I would maybe increase the size of the leaves and make the transition from healthy to dead even more extreme, just to push the concept further.
ReplyDeleteI think after watching the video a couple of times the casual viewer would understand your message, but adding some text here and there might help you get it across even better.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job! I think that maybe the dying of the plant could have happened faster with more informative text towards the end. Maybe if the plant image were larger, this would be easier for the viewer to see and understand. I love the horizontal movement, though. This composition truly makes it feel like the bee is flying through space.
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